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The first thing I'd suggest is getting rid of the second Gyardos immediately. With a 4x weakness to electric, any opponent can get rid of both of them pretty easily.

 

Following this, I'd advise either getting a Gengar or an Alakazam considering your special sweeper (Ampharos) will get outspeeded and most likely one shotted.

 

Aside from that, there's not much else that I can say given my lack of competitive battling knowledge.

 

Hope this helped. :y:

157174 The first thing I'd suggest is getting rid of the second Gyardos immediately. With a 4x weakness to electric, any opponent can get rid of both of them pretty easily.

 

Following this, I'd advise either getting a Gengar or an Alakazam considering your special sweeper (Ampharos) will get outspeeded and most likely one shotted.

 

Aside from that, there's not much else that I can say given my lack of competitive battling knowledge.

 

Hope this helped. :y:

 

Ops sosoososo sorry i missclicked with tinypic XD it is a Gengar mb XD

I don't really get what Ampharos is doing there.

Weavile needs Ice Shard if it's adamant and i don't think hypnosis on Gengar is useful, better use a spore/sleep powder-mon and your Togekiss needs a fairy-move.

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161541 i think you should replace gengar, tyrantina, gya and wealvie

 

If you're going to suggest something, explain your reasoning. Give him viable options to replace them.

163573 actually u should start training evs a little bit better..

 

The same as above, when a player is asking for advice don't just give them a blunt response. Explain to them what they need to fix and why.

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Looks like that tyranitar has to be a tank. You should ev train him to be a tank. He knows sand stream. Remove ampharos and add sand rush excadrill. ( excadrill's speed is x2 when tyranitar's sand storm is active. ) I suggest that you remove gyarados and add a Goodra to your team. He's a nice special wall and he also has access to some nice STAB moves. (dragon) Your team looks extremely offensive, you should consider some defensive options too. (imo )

163611 Looks like that tyranitar has to be a tank. You should ev train him to be a tank. He knows sand stream. Remove ampharos and add sand rush excadrill. ( excadrill's speed is x2 when tyranitar's sand storm is active. ) I suggest that you remove gyarados and add a Goodra to your team. He's a nice special wall and he also has access to some nice STAB moves. (dragon) Your team looks extremely offensive, you should consider some defensive options too. (imo )

 

This is how you give constructive criticism. Future posters take note before telling him what he's doing wrong and offering no real advice.

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