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around here; you are --> around here! You are

the inevitable, and I will --> the inevitable and I will

 

Burglar Richard in the Goldenrod Underground Basement.

 

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kiddo!? --> kiddo?!

now, twirp --> now, you twerp

 

The Rocket Grunt in Goldenrod Underground Basement, the one at the bottom middle.

 

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than your twirpish mind can process --> than what your twerp'ish mind can process

intricate puzzle; I might --> intricate puzzle. I might

looted a Bittery --> found a Bitter

 

The Rocket Grunt in Goldenrod Underground Basement, the one at the top middle.

 

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Only bigger --> ...The only bigger

unsolicited twirps, such as you, --> unsolicited twerps such as you

who have failed to --> that failed to

Ugh, just remember --> Ugh... j-just remember

are a completely different animal --> are completely different

puzzleway --> puzzle

 

The Rocket Grunt in Goldenrod Underground Basement, the one at the bottom right.

 

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twirp --> twerp

luck is not going to --> your luck will not

 

Laura in the Goldenrod Underground Basement.

 

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underground base; as any evidence we gathered could be suppressed if we entered there, as we did not have any lawful access to it --> underground base. As we did not have any lawful access there, any evidence we gathered so far could be suppressed if we entered anyway

 

Sergeant Raul in Goldenrod City, after defeating Gavin at the underground.

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I'm Derwins. I'm an American-English player. I want to help fix the gynormous list of NPC text errors in this game.

  • 2 weeks later...

I would still love to go through the entire scripting and apply all of the grammar + spelling fixes myself.

 

 

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This whole entire conversation needs its semicolons replaced with periods or the like.

destressed -> distressed
more than you thought -> more than what you would think

This is after defeating Gavin and then interacting with these NPCs in Goldenrod City.

 

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Im -> I'm

Eric in Aphrodia Island. I couldn't find anything that would let me proceed either.



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I will take it definitely from you and give you one Heart Scale -> I will give you one Heart Scale for it

Ross in Aphrodia Island.

Edited by Derwins

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I'm Derwins. I'm an American-English player. I want to help fix the gynormous list of NPC text errors in this game.

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