Abandon Pokemon daycare! (Kanto)

Edited November 18, 20205 yr by 0PaRk3R0

5 hours ago, 0PaRk3R0 said:

Abandon Pokemon daycare! (Kanto)

fixed.

Doing Heatran quest! Got some more mistakes in NPC dialogues

Please correct it!

 

Got some more mistakes at Kanto Daycare! Please check that too! Thanks!

Pok?mon => Pokemon
Jhon Belly npc.
Same for Clara 

Edited December 27, 20205 yr by Exaferoy

Sinnoh starting dialogues..

As the screenshot shows, Birch mentions me being the champion of Hoenn, which just isn't true at the given moment (just two badges). One might also be confused about what Birch is saying, if you haven't played the game before and know, that Steven Stone is the Hoenn Champion (potentially a spoiler, too).

 

 

That's what I found while doing the Trick Master challenges, I don't know which of the challenges it is but here you are.

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/733066995536363660/799957613114556456/unknown.png

Hi, I have noticed several instances of "broken English" being used by NPCs. I only recently learnt about this forum post so I was not able to screen capture most of these errors. If at all possible I would love to help out in what I can to correct these, perhaps by looking at a transcript of the dialogue so I can correctly identify and fix them. For now the only one I could screen capture is this one while doing the Lake Trio story. After beating Commander Saturn and releasing the trio, if you press the button again, the dialogue reads as "Better don't touch it since all the Lake Trio already released". It should read something like this instead "The Lake Trio has already been released, I'd better not touch it".

There is a grammatical error when talking to the NPC Catty Del Rey in Origin forest. The message uses the words "for you" twice and it is redundant.

 

There are two different ways this can be re-written, please see below.

• Unfortunately, there isn't anything important for you here.
• Unfortunately for you, there isn't anything important here.

 

 

Thank you, 

Konsurpegg

There is a grammatical error when talking to the language NPC in Origin forest. 

 

The correct way this should be written is below.

• Welcome to Pokémon Revolution Online.

 

 

Thank you,

Konsurpegg