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There is a second grammatical error when talking to your mother in Origin forest. 

 

There are two different ways this can be re-written, please see below.

  • and who knows, maybe even harder than them.
  • and who knows, you might eventually be better than them.

 

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Thank you, 

Konsurpegg

There are two grammatical/spelling errors when talking to Paul in the Viridian city Pokemart. 

 

The correct way to write these is below.

 

  • Bummer... I retreated back here, and this store doesn't carry any more advanced Pokeballs other than the original tier.

 

 

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  • The second mistake is below, the letter T in the word trainers should not be capitalized.

 

 

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Thank you, 

Konsurpegg

 

Edited by Konsurpegg
Minor tweaks

There are two grammatical errors when speaking to the cashier in the Viridian city Pokemart.

 

The correct way to write these is below.

  • Welcome to Viridian Pokemart.
     

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  • Can I interest you in a payment plan?

 

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Thank you, 

Konsurpegg

Edited by Konsurpegg
Added a period

There is a grammatical error when speaking to Fernando on Route 3.

 

The correct way to write this is below.

 

  • I'm relieved that I didn't have to take an arduous walk through the tunnel to return from Cerulean city, after obtaining the Cascade badge!

 

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Thank you, 

Konsurpegg

Edited by Konsurpegg
Grammar error

There is a grammatical error when talking to the stardust seller on Route 25.

 

The correct way to write this is below.

 

  • I really need money right now to get some food and drink. I have 3 stardust to sell, but the item maniac won't buy them for more than $4,500 each.

 

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Thank you, 

Konsurpegg

Edited by Konsurpegg
Minor tweaks

There is a grammatical error when interacting with the Umbreon and Espeon in the Eeveelutionist house in Vermilion city.

 

The correct way to write this is below.

 

  • However, it is more nocturnal/diurnal than Espeon/Umbreon.

 

 

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Thank you, 

Konsurpegg

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