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I normally do not post here so I apologize in advance. I am mainly sharing what I found in which I shared in the past via a Discord server.

 

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COme back --> Come back

 

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yesterday.. --> yesterday...

 

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our last battle.. Come back later --> our last battle...

 

All of these are in Leev Town / Jura Cave. I heavily suggest removing "come back later" though as these are constant in all NPCs there.

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I'm Derwins. I'm an American-English player. I want to help fix the gynormous list of NPC text errors in this game.

  • 2 months later...

I normally do not post here so I apologize in advance.

I am mainly sharing what I found in which I shared in the past via a Discord server.

 

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I'm better now thanks --> I feel better now. Thanks!

Black Belt Nathaniel in Route 215.

 

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just saw you --> have seen you

Pok?mon --> Pokemon

Psychic Carlos in Route 214.

 

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come back for the rematch --> come back in a few days for a rematch

Collector Douglas in Route 214.

 

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house.. --> house...

And --> ...and

visitors.. --> visitors...

You have been kicked out of the house.. --> (You have been kicked out of the house.)

Loner Danny in Valor Lakefront.

 

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I only use Hydreigons, you should try it. --> I use only Hydreigons in my party. You definitely should try, too!

Wwefanrick in Route 222.

 

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Move, away --> Move away,

Rich Boy Trey in Route 222.

 

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on duty, now, but --> on duty right now... but

good exercise --> good exercise for me

Pok?mon --> Pokemon

Policeman Thomas in Route 222.

 

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i'll train --> I'll train

my Shiny Arceus --> a shiny Arceus

Tuber Connor in Route 222.

 

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Wait; I don't have my Magikarp, yet --> ...Wait! I don't have any Magikarp to battle yet

Sailor Luther in Route 222.

 

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costal city is very busy --> is a very busy costal city

Pok?mon --> Pokemon

The woman next to the building when you enter Sunyshore.

 

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Gratz, You have clear --> Good job! You have cleared

The guide in Sunyshore Gym 2, which is labeled as "SunyShore" incorrectly.

 

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seems like --> seems that

power still have --> powers still have

Scientist Tommy in Sunyshore Gym 3, which is labeled as "SunyShore" incorrectly.

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I'm Derwins. I'm an American-English player. I want to help fix the gynormous list of NPC text errors in this game.

I normally do not post here so I apologize in advance.

I am mainly sharing what I found in which I shared in the past via a Discord server.

 

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it in. but I --> it in. I

Youngster Damian again in Victory Road.

 

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people there's --> people! There's

Security Officer Benson in Victory Road.

 

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recent team rocket activity --> Team Rocket's activity recently,

Guard Thomas in Cinnabar Island Gym before battling Blaine.

 

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*3-minute delayed reaction* Wow --> (3-minute delayed reaction) [new text line] ...Wow...

Medium Darcy in Saffron Gym.

 

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hideee --> hiiiide

Psychic Jared in Saffron Gym.

 

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other time.. --> other time!

Psychic Franklin in Saffron Gym.

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I'm Derwins. I'm an American-English player. I want to help fix the gynormous list of NPC text errors in this game.

  • 2 weeks later...

I normally do not post here so I apologize in advance.

I am mainly sharing what I found in which I shared in the past via a Discord server.

 

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get random numbers --> get a random amount

Janine in Route 43, whose name should be changed to prevent confusion from the Fuchsia City gym leader.

 

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pokemon --> Pokemon

Rolling Rolling Rolling --> Rolling... rolling... rolling...

Carl in Route 43.

 

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fighting type --> Fighting-type

Misa in Route 43.

 

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Hello ! --> Hello!

i could rate your Magikarp ? --> I could rate your Magikarp?

No, sorry, i am --> It's unfortunate but I'm

The fisherman in the Lake of Rage house 1.

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I'm Derwins. I'm an American-English player. I want to help fix the gynormous list of NPC text errors in this game.

  • 2 weeks later...

I normally do not post here so I apologize in advance.

 

I am mainly sharing what I found in which I shared in the past via a Discord server.

 

 

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This happens in Route 12, supposedly when you are supposed to interact with Snorlax.

 

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before cutting his trees --> before attempting to cut his trees...

The trees in Berry Garden, if you attempt to interact with it without doing the race.

 

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come back --> Come back

Youngster Ronald in Route 104. All of this, including the other trainers who have this quote, need to be removed and instead provide actual in-game messages.

 

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sandstorm --> Sandstorm

The hiker in Violet City that wants to see a Geodude. The entire message of how Smooth Rock works needs to be in a new message.

 

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You won't pass me --> You won't be able to defeat me

In the Cinnabar Gym. All of the trainers here have this quote in this certain room and needs to be replaced with actual in-game messages.

 

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This requires a comma after the trainer name.
In Bill's House, incorrectly labeled as "Bills House".

 

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I'm telling ya': --> (delete this part)

to try out the --> trying the

else- rather --> else! Rather

wage me in --> I will wage this in

Gambler Andrew in Underground Path.
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twirp --> twerp


Cue Ball Sato in Underground Path.

 

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try not to --> try to not

Super Nerd Glen in Underground Path.

 

Edited by derwins

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I'm Derwins. I'm an American-English player. I want to help fix the gynormous list of NPC text errors in this game.

  • 2 weeks later...

I honestly would love to go through the entire scripting and apply all of the grammar and spelling fixes myself.

 

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in --> to
in English. So please --> in English, so please

 

Trainer Red in Start, even though he should not be saying anything.

 

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about you; stay near --> about you! Stay near

I don't know what they are doing there, but I know for a fact that since --> ...Since
fighting as hard as those two, and who knows, maybe even --> battling more better than those two... Who knows? You might even be
to get hurt; you will always --> to get hurt... You will always
So technically, I --> So, technically, I
Charizard X --> Mega Charizard X
Dragonite, --> Dragonite!
too dangerous; we are going --> too dangerous here! We are going

 

The cutscene with your mother in Start.

 

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you were asleep; he told me --> you were asleep. He told me
license; this allows --> license! This allows
spoken to Oak; he wants --> spoken with Oak. He wants

 

Your mother again in Player House Pallet after leaving Start.

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I'm Derwins. I'm an American-English player. I want to help fix the gynormous list of NPC text errors in this game.

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I would still love to go through the entire scripting and apply all of the grammar and spelling fixes myself.

 

 

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Allright --> Alright
queue --> cue

When choosing the correct desktop at Mahogany Hideout 2F. This only happens on this computer, not the one where Jessie is.

 

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Better go away for a while, it seems it will --> I better step back...! It could

 

The Electrode in the same room.

 

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The ":" needs to not have a space on the trainer's name.

Two Sharpedos --> two Sharpedos

a battle ... --> a battle...

interfer.. --> interfere.

 

.When attempting to visit Nap Island in Route 41 if you do not have Hoenn cleared.

Edited by Derwins

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I'm Derwins. I'm an American-English player. I want to help fix the gynormous list of NPC text errors in this game.

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