My map :3 (newbie) (12th map added)

[Carlito2]

Hello, im newbie in mapping <.< so if i added a map please gimme some advice and tips

 

 

1st map

 

2nd map

 

3rd map

 

4th map

 

 

5th map

 

 

 

6th map

 

 

 

7th map

 

 

 

8th map

 

 

 

9th map

 

 

 

10th map

 

 

 

11th map

 

 

 

12th map

 

[Theprodigy]

Re: My map :3 (newbie)

 

<t>i don't know anything about mapping... but wow thats's good</t>

[Carlito2]

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<r><QUOTE author="TheProdigy" post_id="389342" time="1495614042" user_id="1463698"><s>

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i don't know anything about mapping... but wow thats's good

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Thanks <EMOJI seq="270c">:v:</EMOJI></r>

[Frukti]

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<r>Hello Carlito !<br/>

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I'll give you some tips & advice cause you ask for it ! :p<br/>

I tryed to do something for you :<br/>

<IMG src="https://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2017/21/1495614579-correct.png"><s></e></IMG><br/>

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Majority of your errors are just bad layer used, keep progress & you'll create nice maps :) Good luck !<br/>

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Just see i forget to say on ss : The rock under water, bot left of the map is cut by water ^^ (layer error again :p)</r>

[Carlito2]

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<r><QUOTE author="Frukti" post_id="389346" time="1495614676" user_id="1272256"><s>

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Hello Carlito !<br/>

<br/>

I'll give you some tips & advice cause you ask for it ! :p<br/>

I tryed to do something for you :<br/>

<IMG src="https://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2017/21/1495614579-correct.png"><s></e></IMG><br/>

<br/>

Majority of your errors are just bad layer used, keep progress & you'll create nice maps :) Good luck !<br/>

<br/>

Just see i forget to say on ss : The rock under water, bot left of the map is cut by water ^^ (layer error again :p)

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Thanks for the u.u, im going to review your tips & advice <EMOJI seq="1f601">:grin:</EMOJI></r>

[Furtifk]

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<r>Nice maps <E>:Grin:</E> . Although I don't know that much about map design, I'd say the one you made just now seems too "square" and "perfect", if you get where I'm coming from. All the trees have their designed area so I think you can diversify it a bit without being too linear. However I could be wrong and this is what you want to start off by doing.</r>

[Carlito2]

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<r><QUOTE author="Furtifk" post_id="389361" time="1495617314" user_id="264842"><s>

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Nice maps <E>:Grin:</E> . Although I don't know that much about map design, I'd say the one you made just now seems too "square" and "perfect", if you get where I'm coming from. All the trees have their designed area so I think you can diversify it a bit without being too linear. However I could be wrong and this is what you want start off by doing.

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Thanks <EMOJI seq="270c">:v:</EMOJI></r>

[Prehax]

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<t>[mention]Carlito2[/mention], looks good so far (y) I suggest you try out something less symmetrical as it might be more eye pleasing :P</t>

[Carlito2]

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<r><QUOTE author="PreHax" post_id="389373" time="1495621987" user_id="1120928"><s>

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@Carlito2, looks good so far (y) I suggest you try out something less symmetrical as it might be more eye pleasing :P

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Thanks for the suggestion, will try to do <E>:y:</E></r>

[An1ma]

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<t>wow great job keep it up and im sure u will be mapper in no time!</t>