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Route 14, x13 y55 Typo @ NPC Kiri I think they meant "Whimper" ?

Safari Zone Entrance, x24 y2 Looks like a map gateway but isn't one?

Safari Area 2, x29 y33 Incomplete sign. No mention of Section 1 lying to the east.

Safari Zone Entrance, x26 y24 "safaro" xD

Fuchsia City, x50 y15 6 Blank signs (at least, I think they are signs)

Route 18, x41 y15 Blank sign

Elite Four Will Room "...show you the mercy" Lose "the", and perhaps also lose "you". Exact same line for Koga... (late screenshot) And Bruno... And Karen... (who also looks rather masculine, for someone named Karen, but that doesn't have to be "wrong" ;))

Indigo Plateau, x10 y14 $username ?

Route 35, x11 y9 "...transport(take/deliver) this mail- --to--- a colleague of ours" "It's ---an--- important...."

Elite Four Champion Room Lose the word "on". Same for the 2nd professor...

Elite Four Champion Room "...regret for battling me" Lose the "for".

Elite Four Lance Room "...a place for strongest!" Should add "the" or "only the" before "strongest". Before that, he says "I am Dragon Trainer", should probably add "a" before "Dragon". (forgot screenshot)

Elite Four Lorelei Room "Hey Lorelei."? Is she greeting herself? -.-

Indigo Plateau Center Girl at x15 y6 "...against against..." lose one of them.

Route 16, x31 y37 Biker Camron (name maybe missing an 'e'?) Change "go in" to "go to".

Route 16, x31 y30 Biker Hideo Should be: "...thinking about ---a--- new bike..."

Route 16, x31 y27 Biker Luke says: "Let's put that on a test!" Which is a weird thing to say I think, and should be, for example: "Let's put that to the test!" (screenshot too late but still shows the NPC)

Rocket Hideout B2F Is it Jackson, or is it 'Team Rocket Agent'?

Celadon Gamecorner Stairs This one seems to recognize one/all of the eeveelutions as an Eevee. Not sure if it is a problem or not, though I was thinking they were expecting Jackson and his Eevee.

Celadon Gamecorner Stairs NPC says not enough time has passed since I last bought coins. I've never bought any. The prize exchange...: (keep reading) Meanwhile, next door... (Celadon Gamecorner Prize Center) (No NPC)

Celadon City - x48 y35 "...organization in Team Rocket..." lose the "in". Answer 1: "past-few" lose the hyphen. Answer 2: "...exigenct..." lose the "c".

Celadon Mart 3 Unable to buy the TM, despite having enough money to cover the cost.

Celadon Mart 3 Change "apart" to "a part".

Celadon Mart 1 Nameless NPC refuses to talk, very rude. I want to speak to her supervisor!

Celadon Office Rooftop Know It All Mans Room Change "places" to "place", But even then it still sounds weird I think. Oh well!