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Celadon Office Rooftop Know It All Mans Room Change "places" to "place", But even then it still sounds weird I think. Oh well!

COstume.. make the "O" lowercase.

Route 4 x49 y15 Answer #1 does not fit in the text box.

Ballroom SS Anne "When they are going..." should be "When are they going..."

SS Anne 3F Battle Room "I can prove which one has been more effective than your pathetic brand..." Seems like a weird sentence, but it might just be me.. :/ I would suggest "I can prove my method is far better than your pathetic brand..."

SS Anne 2F Room 2 Cubone (not sure if it was on purpose or not, or if it even matters, but yeah)

SS Anne 1F Kitchen Captain's Aide *preparatory

SS Anne 1F Kitchen "...does not bode well ---for--- the expectancy time..."

SS Anne 1F Room 3 (and probably other locations where nido/x are used. The pokemon used by these trainers have incorrect genders, which they should not be able have. Check by various testers. For example a male Nidoran F, and a male Nidorina.

SS Anne 1F Room 6 "...now as we speak" lose the "now".

"I am hoping they will ---be--- much stronger..." On a side note.. my character looks very unimpressed... xD

*weight-lifting (NPC Kiroro)

SS Anne Basement Room 1 Typo? "...barge on..." to "...barge in..."

SS Anne Basement Room 1 Contextual Text Error "...come across rashly..." either comes, or came, or a different sentence entirely.

SS Anne Basement Room 2 Typo: "...bu tyou'll.."

Last thing he says after you give him the 75k and receive the voucher. Seems weird to me.

"Fire STone" make the "T" lowercase.

Corrected link for Jackson dialog:

Dialog with Jackson after talking to his Eevee for the first time:

I'm not new to pokemon, but I am somewhat new to PRO. A few weeks now. Don't know long this has been online for. I speak English, Dutch, and Spanish, and some bits and pieces of random languages... Feel free to talk to me here or in game :)

Hello people, Say hello to my first post. Cherish it always. -RH