NPC Dialogue Errors [NOT NPC BUGS]

[Unknown007]

Hello everyone,

 

Please report errors in NPC dialogues in this thread (only NPC dialogues, this thread is [glow=red]not[/glow] about getting stuck from NPCs. Such posts can be subjected to deletion without notice). Also mention the map name to make sure the NPC with the error in question can be located, thus fixed as soon as possible from us.

 

NPCs include things like:

• Trainers
  Gym Leaders
  Headbutt Trees
  Dig Spots
  Trash Cans
  Pokemon walking about

 

E.g. of an error in a Gym Leader dialogue:

  Quote

You recieved the Boulder Badge!

Expand  

 

Should really be:

  Quote

You received the Boulder Badge!

Expand  

 

Help us improve the quality of the game! :Smile:

 

Thank you~

 

PS:

Small things that we are trying to keep as a standard:

• 
  "Pokemon" is always titlecased, as do Pokemon names (e.g. Pikachu). Pokemon and Pokemon names never take plural. (e.g. There are many Pokemon here, all of them are Pikachu).
   
  Whenever we quote a Pokemon type, we use: "Grass type Pokemon" (i.e.title case for the type and Pokemon, "type" itself is lowercase, and no hyphen in between, anywhere).
   
  You can ignore "ok". Most are using "ok" like a word in itself, i.e. using the capital 'o' only at the beginning of a sentence, although you might encounter a few 'OK' here and there.
   
  "..." (elipses) are used a quite freely. By that I mean they sometimes indicate pauses and the end of a sentence, and at other times they indicate a brief pause for uncertainty/hesitation. In these cases, the phrases separated by the elipses are considered as a whole as if the elipses do not exist (e.g. "Hey I... wanted to ask you something... Can you battle me please?" The first two parts can very well be read as a single sentence, but the second cannot).

 

PPS: Errors relating to map names are not to be reported in this thread.

Edited November 18, 2020 by Novus

[Chihyung]

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

 

<r><IMG src="https://imgur.com/vj0qiVT.jpg"><s></e></IMG><br/>

<br/>

i met a bug at hoenn<br/>

<br/>

when i talk with the npc,my game crashed<br/>

<br/>

and when i come back this game, i can't talk this npc, help me,please</r>

[Kaiser100]

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

 

<t>Read before post a bug here "this thread is not about getting stuck from NPCs."</t>

[Dhevin]

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

 

<r>Hi,<br/>

<br/>

I think I found some mistakes, sorry if i'm a nitpicker though. <E>:Angel:</E><br/>

 

<SPOILER><s>

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</s><B><s></s>Rustboro City House 1<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Chappy:<e></e></I>

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>I really want to know what are the scripters next objectives<e>

</e></QUOTE> <br/>

Should be

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>I really want to know what the scripters' next objectives are<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Pokemon Trainers School Rustboro<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Poketrainer Guibechi:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>I've learned that there are moves which make my Pokemon or the foes one switch<U><s></s>es<e></e></U> out.<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s> I've learned that there are moves which make my Pokemon or the foes one switch out.<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>The guy with his glasses on next to Julieta:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>Pokemon were known to have a maximum of 2 more stages after it's first form, nowadays Pokemon can Mega Evolve.<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s> Pokemon were known to have a maximum of 2 more stages after <U><s></s>its<e></e></U> first form, nowadays Pokemon can Mega Evolve.<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Rustboro City House 2:<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Mrs. Lita:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"So.. My boys and I are visiting my brother David here in Rustboro. The S.S Tidal will be boarding shortly, and we must leave soon."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"So.. My boys and I are visiting my brother David here in Rustboro. The <U><s></s>S.S.<e></e></U> Tidal will be boarding shortly, and we must leave soon."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>Still Mrs. Lita:<e></e></I>

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Rustboro and it's surrounding areas are huge.. I really don't know where to look for them.."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Rustboro and <U><s></s>its<e></e></U> surrounding areas are huge.. I really don't know where to look for them.."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Rustboro City House 3:<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Hiker Renato:<e></e></I><QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s> "I can see he has <U><s></s>a<e></e></U> great potential."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"I can see he has great potential."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Devon Corporation 2F:<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Kurnia:<e></e></I><QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s> "During my researches, I've explored quiet a lot of sites where I can find Jaw and Sail fossils, and now I would like to sell you those fossils if you're interested." <e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"During my researches, I've explored <U><s></s>quite<e></e></U> a lot of sites where I can find Jaw and Sail fossils, and now I would like to sell you those fossils if you're interested."

<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<I><s></s>Still Kurnia:<e></e></I>

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"But wait! After second thought, I don't think you're experienced enough to handle those fossils." <e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"But wait! <U><s></s>On second thought<e></e></U>, I don't think you're experienced enough to handle those fossils."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>Harvey:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"I only do stuff<U><s></s>s<e></e></U> for famous people"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s> "I only do stuff for famous people"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Rustboro city:<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>The Devon goods guy next to the gym after you beat it:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"He went to the route at the east" <e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"He went eastwards"/"He went to the route to the east"<e>

</e></QUOTE><e>

</e></SPOILER>

 

I don't know if I should've written down stuff like "Yea" -> "Yeah" so I just skipped those.<br/>

Hope I helped, but then again, I could be wrong about some of these.<br/>

Btw, nice profile picture. ;D</r>

[Unknown007]

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

 

<t>Thank you, spot on :) Also allowed me to spot a few others which is always good!<br/>

<br/>

All fixed.</t>

[Dhevin]

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

 

<r><QUOTE author="Unknown007"><s>

  Unknown007 said:

</s><POST content="183364"><s></s>183364<e></e></POST> Thank you, spot on :) Also allowed me to spot a few others which is always good!<br/>

<br/>

All fixed.<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

I found some more:<br/>

 

<SPOILER><s>

  Reveal hidden contents

</s><B><s></s>Route 116<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Hiker Clark:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Caught some great Pokemon... or rocks! I can't decide"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Forgot the punctuation after "decide". Should be<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Caught some great Pokemon... or rocks! I can't decide<U><s></s>!<e></e></U>"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<I><s></s>Mr Briney (The old person with his pet Wingull) outside the cave before retrieving his pet:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Oh, my dear Peeko is in that cave and lost."<e>

</e></QUOTE> should be <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Oh, my dear Peeko is lost in that cave."<e>

</e></QUOTE> Not sure about this one though, since he has an accent.<br/>

<br/>

<br/>

<B><s></s>Rusturf Tunnel<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>I think it was the Aqua grunt after you beat him:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Thought you never learn."<e>

</e></QUOTE> should be <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Thought you<U><s></s>'d<e></e></U> never learn."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Route 104<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Golden Fisherman north-west of the bridge after beating him:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"I got too into fishing."<e>

</e></QUOTE> I think this has to be something like<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s> "I got too <U><s></s>involved<e></e></U> into fishing."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Dewford Town House 1<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Djoni:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Can't you see we're playing playstation?"<e>

</e></QUOTE> I think it should be something like <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Can't you see we're playing <U><s></s>on the<e></e></U> playstation?"<e>

</e></QUOTE><e>

</e></SPOILER>

 

Please correct me if I'm wrong.<br/>

I'm checking every dialogue on mistakes so I'll be posting more as I progress through Hoenn. :)</r>

[Unknown007]

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

 

<t>Nicely spotted! Oh yea and thanks for the compliment :) I probably need to redraw it though, the site's resizing made it look very pixelly xD Need to set some time apart sometime.<br/>

<br/>

And yup, these are good finds. I won't always change it as per your suggestions, if for instance they could be changed to something simpler or if it feels a bit weird to keep the same phrasing, if that makes sense? Like the fisherman, I'd say "I got too much into fishing." to make it simpler. And no pressure on reporting them quickly, you're doing a great job in my eyes ^^</t>

[Dhevin]

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

 

<r>Found some more today:<br/>

 

<SPOILER><s>

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</s><B><s></s>Route 109 House<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Sailor Dwayne:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"So you've beat a few trainers already?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Should be <br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"So you've beat<U><s></s>en<e></e></U> a few trainers already?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<B><s></s>Slateport City<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Gary:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Now that was an exhausting run in the beach..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Should be <br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Now that was an exhausting run <U><s></s>on<e></e></U> the beach..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>Zen Headbutt tutor:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Did you know that Zen Headbutt is one of the strongest psychic moves?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Since you capitalize most Pokémon types I figured this one should be capitalized as well unless you don't refer to the type itself.<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Did you know that Zen Headbutt is one of the strongest <U><s></s>P<e></e></U>sychic moves?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<B><s></s>Slateport City House 1<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>The old lady inside:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"It's so pleasant to have a cup of tea while listening the sound of the ocean."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Should be <br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"It's so pleasant to have a cup of tea while listening <U><s></s>to<e></e></U> the sound of the ocean."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Slateport Museum 2F<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>The Aqua grunt after giving the Devon goods to Devon:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"And they told us this will be an easy task."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Should be <br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"And they told us this <U><s></s>would<e></e></U> be an easy task."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Route 117<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>The house in the north-east corner:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"It's locked"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Forgot the punctuation. Not sure if this was intended or not.<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"It's locked<U><s></s>.<e></e></U>"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<B><s></s>Mauville City Gym<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Helper:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Take care, only Electric type Pokemons are used in this Gym."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

"Pokémon" doesn't have a plural.<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Take care, only Electric type <U><s></s>Pokemon<e></e></U> are used in this Gym."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>Wattson before the battle:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Not that I should expect anything less for someone of your salient stature, [name] - the Kanto and Johto bi-regional champion!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

I think it should be<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Not that I should expect anything less <U><s></s>from<e></e></U> someone of your salient stature, [name] - the Kanto and Johto bi-regional champion!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<B><s></s>Route 111 South<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Cameraman Ty<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Hey, look here! A tough-looking trainer here, of all places!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

I think the double usage of "here" is a bit weird. I would change it to something like this:<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Hey, look over here! A tough-looking trainer, of all places!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<B><s></s>Route 111 House 1<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Woman:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"My husband? Oh, he is on business trip."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

You forgot to use "a".<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"My husband? Oh, he is on <U><s></s>a<e></e></U> business trip."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<B><s></s>Route 112<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Hiker Trent<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Having a sold team is not everything."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

When he lost he said something about having a "solid team" but when I interacted with him again he said this so I assume he meant "solid" instead of "sold".<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Having a <U><s></s>solid<e></e></U> team is not everything."<e>

</e></QUOTE><e>

</e></SPOILER>

 

I'll post some more soon. <E>:Angel:</E></r>

[Unknown007]

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

 

<t>Cool thanks! :)<br/>

<br/>

And yes, for things that are 2-3 words long, we tend to omit the period just like how boards are sometimes displayed as.<br/>

<br/>

All but the last fixed.</t>

[Dhevin]

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

 

<r>Enjoy! <E>:Crazy:</E> :<br/>

<br/>

 

<SPOILER><s>

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</s><B><s></s>Fallarbor Town<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Lady Elsa:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"I hate it that the Volcano ashes of Mt.Chimney often fall here..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

No need to capitalize "volcano" here.<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"I hate it that the <U><s></s>v<e></e></U>olcano ashes of Mt.Chimney often fall here..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Route 114<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Fisherman Claude after being defeated:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Did you know I won at the last fishing contest held in <U><s></s>the<e></e></U> whole Hoenn?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Sounds better without "the".<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Did you know I won at the last fishing contest held in whole Hoenn?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Meteor Falls 1F 1R<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Aqua Grunt after defeating Jackson:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Fine, you take it that way, I'll take it the other way around"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

In my opinion it sounds better without "it".<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Fine, you take that way, I'll take the other way around"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>Magma Grunt after defeating Jackson:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"FIne by me!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Double capitalization on "fine".<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"<U><s></s>Fi<e></e></U>ne by me!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>The note Jackson leaves after defeating him:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"'Hey, better not come on Mt. Chimney through Route 112, or you'll feel sorry!'"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

I think it should be:<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"'Hey, better not come <U><s></s>to<e></e></U> Mt. Chimney through Route 112, or you'll feel sorry!'"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>Meteor Falls 1F 1R, the name of the map in the upper right corner of your screen shows:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Meteor falls 1F 1R"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

According to the world map and the signs outside of the cave it should be:<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Meteor <U><s></s>F<e></e></U>alls 1F 1R"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Same with "Pokemon in Meteor <U><s></s>f<e></e></U>alls 1F 1R"<br/>

<br/>

<br/>

<B><s></s>Mt. Chimney<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>The second Aqua Grunt you fight:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"I will be the one who stop you, kid!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Should be:<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"I will be the one who stop<U><s></s>s<e></e></U> you, kid!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Lavaridge Town House<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Black Belt David:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Certain Pokemon will need these kind of trainings to grow and get stronger."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

In my opinion "trainings" doesn't fit right on the tongue.<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Certain Pokemon will need these kind of <U><s></s>training<e></e></U> to grow and get stronger."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<I><s></s>Black Belt Faried:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Trainings will keep you fit and healthy."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

In my opinion "trainings" doesn't fit right on the tongue. These are both just a personal preference.<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"<U><s></s>Training<e></e></U> will keep you fit and healthy."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Lavaridge Town Gym 1F<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Ninja Boy Shoji:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"With Ninjutsu, I will conceal myself in steam!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

There's no need to capitalize "ninjutsu".<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"With <U><s></s>n<e></e></U>injutsu, I will conceal myself in steam!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>Ninja Boy Shoji after being defeated:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"It looks like I need to learn Senjutsu as well..." "I'm still trying to master Senjutsu, please don't disturb me!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

There's no need to capitalize "senjutsu".<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"It looks like I need to learn <U><s></s>s<e></e></U>enjutsu as well..." "I'm still trying to master <U><s></s>s<e></e></U>enjutsu, please don't disturb me!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>Flannery:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Now let's start the hot battle, should we?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Sounds better like this in my opinion.<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Now let's start the hot battle, <U><s></s>shall<e></e></U> we?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Lavaridge Town<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>May outside of the Gym:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"I guess you should be ready to face your father at the Petalburg city Gym now... I battled this gym earlier and ... let's say I had a really hard time."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

You forgot to capitalize "city", I would also change "this" to "his". I'm not sure if you need to capitalize "let's" after the "..." so i'll leave this up to you.<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"I guess you should be ready to face your father at the Petalburg <U><s></s>C<e></e></U>ity Gym now... I battled <U><s></s>his<e></e></U> gym earlier and ... <I><s></s>let's<e></e></I> say I had a really hard time."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Petalburg City Wally's House<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>The name of the map in the upper right corner of your screen shows:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Petalburg City Wallys House"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

It should be:<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Petalburg City Wally<U><s></s>'s<e></e></U> House"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Petalburg City Gym<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Every trainer:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Welcome to Petalburg Gym, good luck getting to Norman!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

I think it sounds better like this:<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Welcome to <U><s></s>the<e></e></U> Petalburg Gym, good luck getting to Norman!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Mart Petalburg City<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>The kid with a yellow cap:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Do you know that certain potions can heal certain status conditions?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Forgot to capitalize "Potions".<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Do you know that certain <U><s></s>P<e></e></U>otions can heal certain status conditions?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Route 107<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Ray:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Me and my sister Lisa often come here to swim, And we can fight too."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Should be<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"<U><s></s>My sister Lisa and me<e></e></U> often come here to swim, <U><s></s>a<e></e></U>nd we can fight too." or "<U><s></s>My sister Lisa and me<e></e></U> often come here to swim<U><s></s>.<e></e></U> <U><s></s>A<e></e></U>nd we can fight too."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>Ray:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"We need to train more"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Forgot the punctuation.<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"We need to train more<U><s></s>.<e></e></U>"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>Lisa:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Me and my brother Ray often come here to swim, And we can fight too."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Forgot the punctuation.<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"<U><s></s>My brother Ray and me<e></e></U> often come here to swim, <U><s></s>a<e></e></U>nd we can fight too." or "<U><s></s>My brother Ray and me<e></e></U> often come here to swim<U><s></s>.<e></e></U> <U><s></s>A<e></e></U>nd we can fight too."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>Lisa:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"We need to train more"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Forgot the punctuation.<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"We need to train more<U><s></s>.<e></e></U>"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>Swimmer Darrin after he has been defeated:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Cant talk now! Come back later."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Forgot the apostrophe.<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"<U><s></s>Can't<e></e></U> talk now! Come back later."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>Swimmer Denise:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"wanna see?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Forgot to capitalize "wanna".<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"<U><s></s>W<e></e></U>anna see?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>Swimmer Tony:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"I am going to be a Shark Master."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

No need to capitalize "shark" and "master".<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"I am going to be a <U><s></s>s<e></e></U>hark <U><s></s>m<e></e></U>aster.?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<I><s></s>Swimmer Tony after being defeated:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Teeth broken. ewwww"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Forgot the punctuation and capitalization.<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Teeth broken. <U><s></s>E<e></e></U>wwww<U><s></s>!<e></e></U>"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>Swimmer Tony after being defeated:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Catching More."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

No need to capitalize "more".<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Catching <U><s></s>m<e></e></U>ore."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Route 108<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Sailor Cory after being defeated:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"I will be on ship soon."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Forgot to mark the noun.<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"I will be on <U><s></s>a/the<e></e></U> ship soon."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<B><s></s>Route 106<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Swimmer Kyla after being defeated:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Can't talk now,"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Wrong punctuation.<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Can't talk now<U><s></s>.<e></e></U>"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<B><s></s>Route 105<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Swimmer Dawn:<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Heya! Wanna feel the fairy power!?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Forgot to capitalize "Fairy"<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Heya! Wanna feel the <U><s></s>F<e></e></U>airy power!?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<B><s></s>Abandoned Ship 1F<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Beauty Thalia<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Training pokemon is like being in love.. It's not always a bed of roses."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Forgot to capitalize "Pokemon"<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Training <U><s></s>P<e></e></U>okemon is like being in love.. It's not always a bed of roses."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<I><s></s>Sailor Wendy<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Have you give the Scanner to him?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Not sure about the capitalization on "scanner" but there's another mistake in it as well:<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Have you give<U><s></s>n<e></e></U> the Scanner to him?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

<br/>

<B><s></s>Abandoned Ship B1F Room 1<e></e></B><br/>

<br/>

<I><s></s>Xhaj<e></e></I> <QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Find me when you thnk you are."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

 

Forgot the 'i' in 'think'.<br/>

 

<QUOTE><s>

  Quote

</s>"Find me when you th<U><s></s>i<e></e></U>nk you are."<e>

</e></QUOTE><e>

</e></SPOILER>

 

<B><s></s>When trying to enter this door I got the same message twice, but only half of the message the first time:<e></e></B><br/>

<IMG src="https://i.gyazo.com/bc34f169d4155e499a0a4972c069105d.png"><s></e></IMG><br/>

<IMG src="https://i.gyazo.com/355da04da22185bcec4c6b48beff85a0.png"><s></e></IMG><br/>

<br/>

I think i'm almost halfway through Hoenn. :P</r>