NPC Dialogue Errors [NOT NPC BUGS]

Dadoom · June 15, 2016

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

<t>oh my God thats a lot of text.</t>

Kuvishuby · June 16, 2016

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

<r>In Hoenn power plant, the first NPC

Kuvishuby · June 16, 2016

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

</s><POST content="185807"><s></s>185807<e></e></POST> In Hoenn power plant, the first NPC 
<IMG src="https://i.gyazo.com/3ed966357687233e4dea295126dc01c7.png"><s></e></IMG><e>

</e></QUOTE>

Talking to bosses: <s></s>Wnat<e></e> instead of <s></s>What<e></e>

Dadoom · June 16, 2016

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

<t>Women in Vermillion house next to ocean wants Spearow.

1. Sure, ok

2. No...

On 1. It should be "Sure, OK" not "Sure, ok" but that is really a major bug but we need to learn gramatics once in a while</t>

Unknown007 · June 16, 2016

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

<t>Thanks, will get those fixed as soon as possible. Staff tools are not working right now, so unfortunately they will have to remain like that for a little while.</t>

Dhevin · June 16, 2016

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

<r>Got some more for you :P

</s><s></s>Route 109<e></e>

<s></s>Tuber Ricky<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I'm bored... Let's have some battle!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I'm bored... Let's have <s></s>a<e></e> battle!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Route 119B<e></e>

<s></s>Brent<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"There's nothing quite like the feeling of throwing a pokeball and capturing new species."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Forgot to capitalize "Pokeball".

</s>"There's nothing quite like the feeling of throwing a <s></s>P<e></e>okeball and capturing new species."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Route 119A<e></e>

</s>"Back to the bug hunting."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Not sure if 'bug' refers to the typing or not, if not, ignore this one.

</s>"Back to the <s></s>B<e></e>ug hunting."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Donald<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I've got all I need: plenty of antidote, a few Pecha Berries and a bag full of Net Balls."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

I think he refers to the item "Antidote".

</s>"I've got all I need: plenty of <s></s>A<e></e>ntidote<s></s>s<e></e>, a few Pecha Berries and a bag full of Net Balls."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Weather Institute 1F<e></e>

</s>"E: Then I'll call this as a technical issue."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"E: Then I'll call this a technical issue."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Second Aqua Grunt after defeating her/him<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Seems it's too windy in here afterall."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Seems it's too windy in here <s></s>after all<e></e>."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Second Magma Grunt after defeating her/him<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"You don't know how things work, so I won't talk to you"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Forgot the punctuation.

</s>"You don't know how things work, so I won't talk to you<s></s>.<e></e>"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Weather Institute 2F<e></e>

<s></s>Magma Grunt in the upper left corner after being defeated<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Guess i'll just hear..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Guess i'll just listen..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Fortree City<e></e>

<s></s>Old man on the platform next to the Pokemart<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"This city was build on top of an old florest, so the breeze here is always fresh!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"This city was build on top of an old <s></s>forest<e></e>, so the breeze here is always fresh!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Young kid on the platform in the bottom right corner<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"but our Gym Leader uses Flying-Type Pokemon!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

I don't think you need to capitalize "type".

</s>"but our Gym Leader uses Flying-type Pokemon!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Aline<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Good thing you have this device with you, you may find more Kecleons arround blocking your path.."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

The plural of a Pokemon's name is its name and also another mistake in "around".

</s>"Good thing you have this device with you, you may find more <s></s>Kecleon around<e></e> blocking your path.."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Fortree Gym<e></e>

<s></s>Helper<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Take care, only Flying type Pokemons are used in this Gym."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Pokémon has no plural, also in other dialogues you use "-" in between "Flying" and "type" so i'm not sure whether to use one here as well or not so i'll leave this up to you.

</s>"Take care, only Flying type <s></s>Pokemon<e></e> are used in this Gym."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Bird Keeper Will<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"My bird Pokemons are special and well trained."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Pokémon has no plural.

</s>"My bird <s></s>Pokemon<e></e> are special and well trained."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Youngster Jerry<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"My Tropius is in the top percentage of Tropiuses."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Pokémon names don't have a plural form.

</s>"My Tropius is in the top percentage of <s></s>Tropius<e></e>."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Route 120<e></e>

<s></s>Steven<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"[name], are your Pokemons ready to battle?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Pokémon has no plural.

</s>"[name], are your <s></s>Pokemon<e></e> ready to battle?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Jennifer after being defeated.z<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Hmm... you sure are strong."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Forgot to capitalize "you".

</s>"Hmm...<s></s>You<e></e> sure are strong."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Route 121<e></e>

<s></s>Magma Grunt<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Hey, heard there's a new meeting at the Summit of Mount Pyre?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

I don't think you need to capitalize "summit" here.

</s>"Hey, heard there's a new meeting at the <s></s>summit<e></e> of Mount Pyre?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

</s>"Me and my brother here came to visit Safari..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"<s></s>My brother here and me<e></e> came to visit <s></s>the<e></e> Safari..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

</s>"Me and my sister here came to visit Safari..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"<s></s>My sister here and me<e></e> came to visit <s></s>the<e></e> Safari..."<e>

</e></QUOTE><e>

</e></SPOILER></r>

Dhevin · June 17, 2016

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

<r>Some more:

</s>In every battlescreen you say "A Wild [name] Attacks.","The Opposing Trainer is changing Pokemon.","[name Pokemon] Attacks [Other Pokemon] with [move]." and "It's Super Effective.".

I don't see a reason to capitalize "opposing trainer","attacks","wild" and "super effective" here.

If you can change all the battlescreens at once I'd change them. If not then I'd just leave it like this.

But then again, this is just my opinion.

</s>"pokemon"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Skipped the dialogue too fast so I didn't get the full sentence but I believe you forgot to capitalize "Pokemon".

</s>"<s></s>Pokemon<e></e>"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Pokeball on the ground:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"a Ultraball"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Skipped the dialogue too fast so I didn't get the full sentence but I believe you wrote "a" instead of "an".

</s>"<s></s>an<e></e> Ultraball"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Mt. Pyre Exterior<e></e>

<s></s>Last Grunt:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"You have no idea what's at the top of this Summit."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

There's no reason to capitalize "summit".

</s>"You have no idea what's at the top of this <s></s>summit<e></e>."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Mt. Pyre Summit<e></e>

<s></s>One of the last Grunts after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I shall hide in my shellter from now on, ugly things will happen."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I shall hide in my <s></s>shelter<e></e> from now on, ugly things will happen."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Archie:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I will go to the underwater cavern where Kyorgre retreated to last time."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I will go to the underwater cavern where <s></s>Kyogre<e></e> retreated to last time."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Maxie:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"we could only presume that amplifying the power of the Orbs."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

I don't see a reason to capitalize "orbs".

</s>"we could only presume that amplifying the power of the <s></s>orbs<e></e>."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

</s>"Indeed, their strength will grow beyond human imagination when they will get in touch with the Orbs."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

I don't see a reason to capitalize "orbs". They say it a couple more times in this dialogue.

</s>"Indeed, their strength will grow beyond human imagination when they will get in touch with the <s></s>orbs<e></e>."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Route 123<e></e>

<s></s>Ace Trainer Clyde:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Good luck for the Hoenn league, man!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Good luck for the Hoenn <s></s>League<e></e>, man!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Fisherman Larry:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"It's not hobby or sport, or anything like that!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"It's not <s></s>a<e></e> hobby or sport, or anything like that!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Fisherman Larry after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Every time I find a quiet strong Pokemon, ..." "I only fish Pokemon that has good stats."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Every time I find a <s></s>quite<e></e> strong Pokemon, ..." "I only fish Pokemon that <s></s>have<e></e> good stats."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Lilycove City<e></e>

</s>"Hello, [Name]" "At this point, I there's no way I can lose!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Forgot the punctuation. Also you forgot a part of your sentence.

</s>"Hello, [Name]<s></s>.<e></e>" "At this point, there's no way I can lose." <e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>The sign on the left of the Pokecenter and the worldmap:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Lilicove City"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"<s></s>Lilycove<e></e> City" <e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Pokecenter Lilycove City<e></e>

<s></s>Stark:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Oh well.. Tony got the last Iron Man suit from the department store, that left me only with the mask."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

I love the little easter eggs you guys put into this game. :P Also, it should be like this:

</s>"Oh well.. Tony got the last Iron Man suit from the <s></s>Department Store<e></e>, that left me only with the mask." <e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Mirna:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Jessica, what did you buy from the department store?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be like this:

</s>"Jessica, what did you buy from the <s></s>Department Store?<e></e>"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Lilycove City House 3<e></e>

</s>"He beat me in almost every games we played anyways.."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be like this:

</s>"He beat me in almost every <s></s>game<e></e> we played anyways.."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Lilycove Department Store 1F<e></e>

<s></s>Billy:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Hey, sir? Do you know who my idle is? Jackson?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

I think you meant "idol" instead of "idle". And probably the wrong punctuation.

</s>"Hey, sir? Do you know who my <s></s>idol<e></e> is? Jackson<s></s>!<e></e>"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Lilycove Department Store 2F<e></e>

<s></s>Richard:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I hate having to retread to all locational variants of Pokemarts to buy their specific assortment of items;"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

I think you meant "retreat" instead of "retread", not sure about this one though.

</s>"I hate having to <s></s>retreat<e></e> to all locational variants of Pokemarts to buy their specific assortment of items;"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Lilycove Museum 2F<e></e>

<s></s>Two of the signs:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"The land titan came to, and raised the lands."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Not sure about this random "to".

</s>"The land titan came and raised the lands."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Lilycove Motel 2F<e></e>

<s></s>Old Lady Janice after clicking "No":<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Okay... please come back if you do have one or change your mind!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Forgot to capitalize "please".

</s>"Okay... <s></s>Please<e></e> come back if you do have one or change your mind!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Old Man Goeffrey:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Nah, didn't think so, what with your Game Boy's and your Nintendo's and what-not."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Not sure if his name is actually "Goeffrey" or if it was meant to be "Geoffrey" so I'll leave this up to you. Should be:

</s>"Nah, didn't think so, with your <s></s>Game Boys<e></e> and your <s></s>Nintendos<e></e> and what-not."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Old Man Bernard:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"who are you?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Forgot to capitalize "who".

</s>"<s></s>Who<e></e> are you?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Route 111 Desert<e></e>

<s></s>Camper Cliff:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Does wearing those Go-Goggles make you feel like some kind of champion for justice?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Does wearing those Go-Goggles make you feel like some kind of champion <s></s>of<e></e> justice?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Ruin Maniac Dusty after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I've been around for two years... no three!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I've been around for two years... <s></s>No, three<e></e>!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Magma Hideout 1F<e></e>

<s></s>Second Magma Grunt after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"You're that biregional champion who always bother with our plans, aren't you?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Not sure if you want to capitalize "champion" here or not.

</s>"You're that biregional champion who always <s></s>bothers<e></e> with our plans, aren't you?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Last Magma Grunt:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I will be the one who stop you!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I will be the one who <s></s>stops<e></e> you!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Magma Hideout 2F1R<e></e>

<s></s>First Magma Grunt:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I will show you how scary is this place!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I will show you how scary this place is!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>The Electrode before and after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"krrt" "bzz.."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Krrt" "Bzz..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Magma Hideout 2F2R<e></e>

<s></s>First Magma Grunt:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"That biregional champion who succesfully made team Rocket went away from both Kanto and Johto."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Maybe capitalize "champion".

</s>"That biregional champion who succesfully made <s></s>Team Rocket go<e></e> away from both Kanto and Johto."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Second Magma Grunt after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"There must be at least 1 of our member who can beat you!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"There must be at least <s></s>one<e></e> of our <s></s>members<e></e> who can beat you!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>The Electrode before and after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"krrt" "bzz.."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Krrt" "Bzz..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Magma Hideout 3F1R<e></e>

<s></s>First Magma Grunt after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"But I believe on the other members!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"But I believe <s></s>in<e></e> the other members!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Magma Hideout 4F<e></e>

<s></s>Magma Admin Tabitha after Groudon escaped:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Where could have him go?" "and go straight away to the Aqua Hideout on Lilycove to call the others."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Where could he have gone to?" "and go straight away to the Aqua Hideout <s></s>in<e></e> Lilycove to call the others."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Team Aqua Hideout 1F<e></e>

<s></s>First Aqua Grunt:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I cannot believe you fainted my Pokemons."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I cannot believe you fainted my <s></s>Pokemon<e></e>."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Aqua Grunt on (X: 50 Y: 38):<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I might be lost to you.."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I might <s></s>have<e></e> lost to you."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Aqua Researcher on (X: 52 Y: 14) before and after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I love researching Pokemons, that's why I'm working as a researcher for team Aqua!" "Ok... I'm done researching Poochyenas" "Gonna look for stronger Pokemons for my next research"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I love researching <s></s>Pokemon<e></e>, that's why I'm working as a researcher for <s></s>Team<e></e> Aqua!" "<s></s>OK<e></e>... I'm done researching <s></s>Poochyena<e></e>" "Gonna look for stronger <s></s>Pokemon<e></e> for my next research"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Aqua Researcher on (X: 47 Y: 10):<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I'm doing some research with these poochyenas.." "You will regret for disturbing me!" "Thanks to you I should now restart my research from scratch..." "Well then, I will look for more healthy Poochyenas"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I'm doing some research with these <s></s>Poochyena<e></e>.." "You will regret disturbing me!" "Thanks to you I now need to restart my research from scratch..." "Well then, I will look for more healthy <s></s>Poochyena<e></e>"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Team Aqua Hideout B1F<e></e>

<s></s>Both the Electrode:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"krrt"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Krrt"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Team Aqua Hideout B2F<e></e>

<s></s>Magma Admin Tabitha:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I told him to WAIT MY ORDERS!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I told him to WAIT <s></s>FOR<e></e> MY ORDERS!"<e>

</e></QUOTE><e>

</e></SPOILER>

I'm almost finished with Hoenn. <E>:Crazy:</E></r>

Unknown007 · June 17, 2016

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

<t>Thanks will get to them tomorrow. Fixed a bunch of issues today and too tired to get them done ^^;

EDIT: Fixed all of them :)</t>

Dhevin · June 18, 2016

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

<r>More:

</s><s></s>Route 124<e></e>

<s></s>Swimmer Roland after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Your Pokemon might now always be with you, you know?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Your Pokemon might <s></s>not<e></e> always be with you, you know?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Swimmer Grace after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Variation and diversity is the key!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Variation and diversity <s></s>are<e></e> the key!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Swimmer Rita after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Nooo! I Lost..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Nooo! I <s></s>l<e></e>ost..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Mossdeep City<e></e>

<s></s>Peter:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"you surprised me, dude!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"<s></s>You<e></e> surprised me, dude!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Indra:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"This city is a paradise of Divers!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"This city is a paradise <s></s>for divers<e></e>!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Elder Felix:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I'm really glad I live at this city..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I'm really glad I live <s></s>in<e></e> this city..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Mossdeep City: Backdoor House 1<e></e>

</s>"I always wanted to have a Secret Base in my ealier days..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I always wanted to have a Secret Base in my <s></s>earlier<e></e> days..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Mossdeep City: Backdoor House 2<e></e>

<s></s>Little girl:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I see you have picked "Mudkip at the beginning of your journey!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

There's a quotation mark next to "Mudkip".

</s>"I see you have picked <s></s>Mudkip<e></e> at the beginning of your journey!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Mossdeep City House<e></e>

<s></s>Youngster Patrick:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Hey, you should be Dhevin right?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Forgot a comma.

</s>"Hey, you should be Dhevin, right?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Mossdeep Pokemart<e></e>

<s></s>One of the guys with glasses on at the table:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I'm trying to help my friend with the Tele=Kinetic technique."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I'm trying to help my friend with the <s></s>telekinetic<e></e> technique."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>The other guy with glasses on at the table:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I'm trying to learn the Tele-Kinetic technique."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I'm trying to learn the <s></s>telekinetic<e></e> technique."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Pokecenter Mossdeep City<e></e>

<s></s>Black Belt Viki:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"My fighting type Pokemon don't have a chance against Tate nor Liza." "I'm planning to teach my Pokemon dark moves once they got better." <e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"My <s></s>Fighting-type<e></e> Pokemon don't have a chance against Tate nor Liza." "I'm planning to teach my Pokemon <s></s>Dark<e></e> moves once they got better." <e>

</e></QUOTE>

</s>"His tricks and magics are just.. amazing!" <e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"His tricks and <s></s>magic<e></e> are just.. amazing!" <e>

</e></QUOTE>

</s>"I didn't believe in magics, ..." <e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I didn't believe in <s></s>magic<e></e>, ..." <e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Mossdeep Gym<e></e>

<s></s>Helper:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Tate & Liza uses Psychic type Pokemon;"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Tate & Liza <s></s>use Psychic-type<e></e> Pokemon;"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Martha after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I still can't belive it..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I still can't <s></s>believe<e></e> it..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Kindra:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"<Kindra beckons you over.> ..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"<Kindra beckons you over> ..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Joshua after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Thanks for the help"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Forgot the punctuation.

</s>"Thanks for the help."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

</s>"My name is Liza, I'm one of the Mossdeep Gym leader, while the other one is my twin, Tate."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"My name is Liza, I'm one of the Mossdeep Gym <s></s>Leaders<e></e>, while the other one is my twin, Tate.<e>

</e></QUOTE>

</s>"My name is Tate, I'm one of the Mossdeep Gym leader, while the other one is my twin, Liza."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"My name is Tate, I'm one of the Mossdeep Gym <s></s>Leaders<e></e>, while the other one is my twin, Liza.<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Route 127<e></e>

<s></s>Bird Keeper Bryon:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Bird Pokemons have excellent vision.."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Bird <s></s>Pokemon<e></e> have excellent vision.."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Triathlete Jaylon:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"If you see anyone in trouble, give me a shout, ok?"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"If you see anyone in trouble, give me a shout, <s></s>OK?<e></e>"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>The blue Pokeball on the ground:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"It looks like someone abandoned a pokemon here..." "I can't believe someone would abandon a Regular Old Heracross." "You got a Regular Old Heracross!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"It looks like someone abandoned a <s></s>Pokemon<e></e> here..." "I can't believe someone would abandon a <s></s>regular old<e></e> Heracross." "You got a <s></s>regular old<e></e> Heracross!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Black Belt Koji:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"What I learned at Dewford's Pokemon gym..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"What I learned at Dewford's Pokemon <s></s>Gym<e></e>..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Fisherman Roger:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I guess I'm the weakest fisherman around here, I can't seem to win a even a single time."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I guess I'm the weakest fisherman around here, I can't seem to win even a single time."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Route 127 Underwater<e></e>

<s></s>Diver Kailyn after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>""<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Forgot to make her say the "bloop" sounds, she just says her sentence.

</s>""<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Diver Aileen after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"(Good Game!)"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"(Good <s></s>game<e></e>!)"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Seafloor Cavern R8<e></e>

<s></s>First Magma Grunt:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I will be the one who beat you!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I will be the one who <s></s>beats<e></e> you!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Seafloor Cavern R9<e></e>

<s></s>Aqua Admin Matt:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Guess you want to find out what is going out here."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

I think it should be:

</s>"Guess you want to find out what is going <s></s>on<e></e> here."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Magma Admin Tabitha:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Boss gave us a call and wanted us on Sootopolis City." "So, if you really want to see me, come in Sootopolis."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

I think it should be:

</s>"Boss gave us a call and wanted us <s></s>in<e></e> Sootopolis City." "So, if you really want to see me, come <s></s>to<e></e> Sootopolis." <e>

</e></QUOTE><e>

</e></SPOILER></r>

Dhevin · June 18, 2016

Re: NPC Dialogue Errors

<r>Even more:

</s><s></s>Route 128<e></e>

<s></s>Triathlete Isaiah:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Ever Grande City is still a long ways away..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Ever Grande City is still a long <s></s>way<e></e> away..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Route 129 Underwater<e></e>

<s></s>Diver Coral:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"... but each of them are unique!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"... <s></s>B<e></e>ut each of them are unique!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Diver Jason:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Ok, looks like you did understand my battle ..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Didn't get the whole sentence:

</s>"<s></s>OK<e></e>, looks like you did understand my battle ..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Diver Colten:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Elapsed Time: 20 minutes 14 seconds..." "Now let's see how long will it takes for me to beat you!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Elapsed <s></s>time<e></e>: 20 minutes 14 seconds..." "Now let's see how long it takes for me to beat you!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Route 129<e></e>

<s></s>Fisherman Fisk:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Fascinating isn't it, how Pokemon ..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Fascinating isn't it? How Pokemon ..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Route 130<e></e>

<s></s>Swimmer Rodney before and after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I didn't expect to see a trainer out in the sea!" "It has been a while since my last battle with a trainer like you!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I didn't expect to see a <s></s>Trainer<e></e> out in the sea!" "It has been a while since my last battle with a <s></s>Trainer<e></e> like you!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Route 130<e></e>

</s>"Then you must beat either me or my sis... or both if you wish!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Then you must beat either me or my sis... <s></s>Or<e></e> both if you wish!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

</s>"Then you must beat either me or my bro... or both if you wish!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Then you must beat either me or my bro... <s></s>Or<e></e> both if you wish!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Pacifidlog Town<e></e>

<s></s>Fisherman Jed:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I'm trying to get the perfect WAILMER with my friend GOLDUCK here!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I'm trying to get the perfect <s></s>Wailmer<e></e> with my friend <s></s>Golduck<e></e> here!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Pacifidlog Town House 3<e></e>

<s></s>Fisherman Trevish:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I actually fished a lot of rare Pokemons with my Super Rod!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I actually fished a lot of rare <s></s>Pokemon<e></e> with my Super Rod!"<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Pacifidlog Town House 2<e></e>

</s>"If only we have enough money for another vacation..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"If only we <s></s>had<e></e> enough money for another vacation..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Pacifidlog Town House 4<e></e>

<s></s>Pokemon Collector Shawn:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I'm currently trying to collect Wailmers and observe ..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I'm currently trying to collect <s></s>Wailmer<e></e> and observe ..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Route 132<e></e>

<s></s>Swimmer Alsut before and after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Hey, wanna see how good am I in a Pokemon battle?" "Err... seems like you're better than me."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Hey, wanna see how good I am in a Pokemon battle?" "Err... <s></s>Seems<e></e> like you're better than me."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Route 133<e></e>

<s></s>Swimmer Linda after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Uh... but I didn't expect to lose..." "Please give me some times to prepare, you can come back later."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Uh... <s></s>But<e></e> I didn't expect to lose..." "Please give me some <s></s>time<e></e> to prepare, you can come back later."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Ace Trainer Warren after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Of all people, I've only seen one person who raise their Pokemon properly, which is you."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Of all people, I've only seen one person who <s></s>raised<e></e> their Pokemon properly, which is you."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Swimmer River:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"But then I found out that swimming is way more fun after I got slipped into the water..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"But then I found out that swimming is way more fun after I slipped into the water..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Swimmer Franklin after being defeated:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"Quite a lot of trainers are brought here by the currents..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"Quite a lot of <s></s>Trainers<e></e> are brought here by the currents..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

<s></s>Route 134<e></e>

<s></s>Black Belt Hitoshi:<e></e> <QUOTE><s>

</s>"I still can't accept my lost..."<e>

</e></QUOTE>

Should be:

</s>"I still can't accept my <s></s>loss<e></e>..."<e>

</e></QUOTE><e>

</e></SPOILER></r>

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