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@RoyalHotness

Great posts on the dialogue. Keep doing this. We always see those issues, its nice to have them broken down the way you have them. Keep going with this, it will be very beneficial.

 

Will do, thank you! :Smile:

 

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First of all, Royal is doing an excellent job with his reports.

 

I do want to add one other thing.

 

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You can't use a comma in this way.

 

Two choices:

1. "I came to visit Brock. He is an old friend of mine."

The original dialogue is actually two sentences. Exchange the comma for a period.

 

Orrrrrrrrrrrr...

 

2. "I came to visit Brock, an old friend of mine."

You can keep the comma by removing "he is." This suggestion turns the phrase "an old friend of mine" into an appositive.

 

 

Either way is correct. <3

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Re: General Bugs

 

<r>i come from cinnabar and the game dont let me proceed, first event, no eeve there, then i entered a house and bam with was there outside wad to battle again.<br/>

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@Jacoboso In Cinnabar Gym, behind Guard Thomas. I think it can be nice if you place an item there so we can get it only by moving the guard there. ^-^ Someone told me to give all kind of ideas in case one of them can help this game become a nicer one =) Hope Im not bothering you, have a nice day.

 

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@Gedang cant proceed to route 1 from pallet town.. after i hve my 7th badge, i am bout to get my 8th badge... but icant go to route 1.. there is text message just like the 1st time i come to pallet town.. i wonder whats with the eevee Delete

 

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