Should be "Come around some other time"

 

 

 

Just noticed something else, the npc should be called Picnicker.

Ecruteak City Costume Mart

Missing NPC

 

Yeah thats my bad, i only fixed the lavender one, this one has the same mapping errors too as the other one did. Ill make the shops shortly (thats why the NPC is missing)

 

I just also want to say thank you to everyone who is taking the time to help out. Youre all doing a great job.

Something very miniscule. No period at the end of the sentence.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Interacting with this sign made my avatar freeze in place, unable to move.

Other testers did not have this problem, and reported to see an empty space between my avatar and the signpost.

So, this might be a lag issue rather than a script error or whatever else.

Reporting it still, just in case it happens again in the future.

Blackthorn City Dragons Club 3F

Head Recruiter

He says "We are looking to special trainers to join our club"

It should be "we are looking for special trainers to join our club"

Needs to be breathe not breath

 

 

 

needs to be Team Rocket

 

 

 

need to lose a capital off Knows. Rockets should be capitalized

 

 

 

no caps needed for Am after a comma

 

 

 

NPC needs to be renamed picnicker

 

 

Checking dialogue

Act I:

Came in like a Boulder badge.

 

(Results will be listed here per map and per NPC, maps divided by spoiler buttons.

Location and error details will be printed on the screenshot, as per usual.)

 

Pallet Town

1

2

3

[spoil][/spoil]

Viridian City

1

2

3

[spoil][/spoil]

Route 2

1

2

3

4

[spoil][/spoil]

Viridian Forest

1

2

3

4

5

6

[spoil][/spoil]

Pewter City

1

2

3 : Because the player may not always have a water pokemon available to them, as they are not catchable from the wild, in the zones leading to this Gym. And the player may not always get a Horsea frrom the Maze, if they even know of the maze's existence. (assuming at least some players will just run through Viridian Forest like they would on the original games, not expecting a maze in the corner.)

4

5

6

 

End of Act I

Stay tuned...

[spoil]Ecruteak City Costume Mart

Missing NPC

[/spoil]

 

[spoil]Yeah thats my bad, i only fixed the lavender one, this one has the same mapping errors too as the other one did. Ill make the shops shortly (thats why the NPC is missing)[/spoil]

 

I just also want to say thank you to everyone who is taking the time to help out. Youre all doing a great job.

 

I'm sure I speak for all of the testers when I say: Thanks, and, our pleasure. :Angel:

Fixed. @Mastersiriu, at the next client update it will appear

 

ok, tthanks!

@RoyalHotness

Great posts on the dialogue. Keep doing this. We always see those issues, its nice to have them broken down the way you have them. Keep going with this, it will be very beneficial.