Checking dialogue

Act II:

Cascading

[spoil]Original post cut out of this one.[/spoil]

 

:Heart-eyes: The above post has been edited, updated, completed. :kiss:

Random NPC errors

 

Underground2 4, 35

Timothy

Hey Kid, let's battle!!

Hey kid, let's battle!

Remove capital "k" in kid, only one exclamation mark

"Hmph, I guess my POKEMON couldn't cut it

I guess my Pokemon couldn't cut it.

Remove Hmph, just sounds weird. In Pokemon, only capitalize first letter, add period at end

 

Goldenrod City 63, 51

NPC trading Drowzee for Machop

My Machop for your Drowzee

My Machop for your Drowzee?

Remove extra spaces, and add question mark at end

 

Goldenrod City 26, 30

Never eat slimy caterpies.

Never eat slimy Caterpies.

Capitalize Caterpie

 

Route 34 21, 87

Jenn

How did you find out our hidden spot!?

How did you find our hidden spot?

Remove the word "out" and drop the exclamation mark.

Kate

Okay, I will concede that we can not outbattle you; it still doesn't make you okay to come here unsolicitedly.

I will concede that we cannot defeat you, but it doesn't make it okay for you to come here unsolicited.

Use my phrase instead, it is easier to understand

Act III

Thundering toward Vermilion City

 

Route 5

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[spoil][/spoil]

 

Underground2 :Light: Nice name... May I suggest something like "Tunnel 2", or "Cerulean - Vermilion Tunnel"?

[spoil][/spoil]

 

Route 6

[spoil][/spoil]

 

Vermilion City 2 :Light: (maybe rename this to "Vermilion City flashback"?)

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Misclicked after this, had to relog, but noticed the same error on the next page. Cannot find a way to reproduce the dialogue. Please check it or help me get it back. :thanks:

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Okay so I missed some pages due to hitting space (which is rather annoying, while typing in chat, the dialogue advances without me wanting it to)... Anyway, I missed some, but they all have the same error: a space before the column. This is probably due to the $username thing otherwise not working, I understand that. But it still looks wrong.

:Exclam: :Exclam: :Exclam: If whoever corrects these does not want to check the rest of the dialogue pages for themselves, but still wants them checked, please reset my progress. (at least with Psychic Wade) :thanks: :kiss:

[spoil][/spoil]

 

Vermilion City

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2

3

4

5

6

7

*maybe "calming" would be best.

8

9

[spoil][/spoil]

 

S.S. Anne

SSAnne 1F

SSAnne Basement

Also if I saw correctly, the previous page had Ticket capitalized for some reason.

 

End of Act III

Stay tuned...

@RoyalHotness

Whenever Pokemon is used in any sentence, it is always used as Pokemon, not pokemon, not POKEMON, but Pokemon. So look out for those in the dialogue. Again, excellent work.

@RoyalHotness

Whenever Pokemon is used in any sentence, it is always used as Pokemon, not pokemon, not POKEMON, but Pokemon. So look out for those in the dialogue. Again, excellent work.

 

There is a multitude of discussions about this very topic, that you can find online.

Various systems of when to capitalize the word 'pokemon' seem to be acceptable or unacceptable, depending on who you ask.

I personally don't capitalize the word when I see it as a general term, much like 'humans', 'animals', 'houses'. I see 'pokemon' in that list.

I would only capitalize it if it was in regards to a title, such as 'Pokemon Trainer' or 'Pokemon' being the title of a game, etc.

 

However, if whoever has the final say on NPC dialog thinks it is perfectly fine either way, I will stop reporting them. :Crazy:

@RoyalHotness

Whenever Pokemon is used in any sentence, it is always used as Pokemon, not pokemon, not POKEMON, but Pokemon. So look out for those in the dialogue. Again, excellent work.

 

There is a multitude of discussions about this very topic, that you can find online.

Various systems of when to capitalize the word 'pokemon' seem to be acceptable or unacceptable, depending on who you ask.

I personally don't capitalize the word when I see it as a general term, much like 'humans', 'animals', 'houses'. I see 'pokemon' in that list.

I would only capitalize it if it was in regards to a title, such as 'Pokemon Trainer' or 'Pokemon' being the title of a game, etc.

 

However, if whoever has the final say on NPC dialog thinks it is perfectly fine either way, I will stop reporting them. :Crazy:

 

@Red

Can you advise us on how we should be reporting the use of Pokemon in dialogue? There is very high inconsistency throughout PRO with the use of pokemon, Pokemon, and POKEMON. Whatever the staff wants, that is fine, but I would like to see it consistent.

@RoyalHotness

Whenever Pokemon is used in any sentence, it is always used as Pokemon, not pokemon, not POKEMON, but Pokemon. So look out for those in the dialogue. Again, excellent work.

 

There is a multitude of discussions about this very topic, that you can find online.

Various systems of when to capitalize the word 'pokemon' seem to be acceptable or unacceptable, depending on who you ask.

I personally don't capitalize the word when I see it as a general term, much like 'humans', 'animals', 'houses'. I see 'pokemon' in that list.

I would only capitalize it if it was in regards to a title, such as 'Pokemon Trainer' or 'Pokemon' being the title of a game, etc.

 

However, if whoever has the final say on NPC dialog thinks it is perfectly fine either way, I will stop reporting them. :Crazy:

 

@Red

Can you advise us on how we should be reporting the use of Pokemon in dialogue? There is very high inconsistency throughout PRO with the use of pokemon, Pokemon, and POKEMON. Whatever the staff wants, that is fine, but I would like to see it consistent.

 

too me should be Pokemon.

When battling a special Pokemon in the Power Plant (spoiler alert), the text says "Zapdos Attacks" need to capitalize the Attacks

Also, after defeating Zapdos, it says "Zapdos Flew Away" no need to capitalize the flew away part.

[image]https://prntscr.com/7rj2ba[/image]

Can't get to this item without teleporting, but if you do, you get this message.

 

Side note, why can't I get the image to appear using the image function

https://prntscr.com/7rj58y

Lapras should be capitalized here