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From Start to Route 2

 

Start

The “t” in “about” is cut off by Oak’s hand

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Use : instead of – to be more consistent with other message boards

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Should be: My name is Brock and I am the Pewter City Gym leader.

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Decap “lab” ..the sentence after this needs a period, I missed SS

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Decap “lab”

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Remove space after username

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Cap Pokemon

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Spell out “professor” and put a cap on Pokemon

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Neighbor

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Mom instead of mum

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Fine instead of Fiine

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Cap Pokemon

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Cap Pokemon, combine all 3 below SS into one shot, say “you will end up fighting as hard” so add “up”

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Decap Mom, Cap Pokemon, add period

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Pallet Town

Adventures

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Decap mother on both items

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Pallet Town –so drop all caps

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Professor Oak’s Lab – spell out professor and at apostrophe to Oak

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Decap Hello

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And their Pokemon – add d on end of and, cap Pokemon

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Cap Pokedex and Pokemon

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There are 3 Pokemon here! They are inside the Pokeballs

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Choice of a Pokemon

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The Pokedex or a Pokedex

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Decap This

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Drop the all caps, it is hard on the eyes

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Route 1

Drop the “freakin” …bad for kids to read, could say really instead

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Viridian City

There used to be fishing competitions here

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Would you like to learn Dream Eater for $4000?

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Decap Welcome

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Drop “freaking”

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Cap Poison Sting

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Decap best school

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Potions

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Pokemon

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Antidotes

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My dad loves Pokemon too!

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Decap Gym?? not sure

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Swap the first “are” and “you”

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From me instead of for me

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Cap Pokemon

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Decap School

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Engineer

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I started over and looked at dialogue from the start to Route 2. Let me know when this is fixed and I will work on the next set. I know there is a lot of double posts in here from other testers, but I wanted to make sure everything gets captured. I suggest moving the fixed reports to a section labeled "resolved reports" so this section is not so cluttered.

 

Decap School

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Engineer

 

"vacancies"

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