Hiking with a suit should be hard i reckon.

 

Change Diglett "image" With an overworld sprite

 

Missing NPC's

 

Invisible Item, needs overworld pokeball

"AHAH! I, Trick Master ...."

One Island Total items found : 4

Supposedly items to be found : 16 (excluding rock smash and ruby) Based original game.

From Start to Route 2

 

Start

The “t” in “about” is cut off by Oak’s hand

Use : instead of – to be more consistent with other message boards

Should be: My name is Brock and I am the Pewter City Gym leader.

Decap “lab” ..the sentence after this needs a period, I missed SS

Decap “lab”

Remove space after username

Cap Pokemon

Spell out “professor” and put a cap on Pokemon

Neighbor

Mom instead of mum

Fine instead of Fiine

Cap Pokemon

Cap Pokemon, combine all 3 below SS into one shot, say “you will end up fighting as hard” so add “up”

Decap Mom, Cap Pokemon, add period

 

Pallet Town

Adventures

Decap mother on both items

Pallet Town –so drop all caps

Professor Oak’s Lab – spell out professor and at apostrophe to Oak

Decap Hello

And their Pokemon – add d on end of and, cap Pokemon

Cap Pokedex and Pokemon

There are 3 Pokemon here! They are inside the Pokeballs

Choice of a Pokemon

The Pokedex or a Pokedex

Decap This

Drop the all caps, it is hard on the eyes

 

Route 1

Drop the “freakin” …bad for kids to read, could say really instead

 

Viridian City

There used to be fishing competitions here

Would you like to learn Dream Eater for $4000?

Decap Welcome

Drop “freaking”

Cap Poison Sting

Decap best school

Potions

Pokemon

Antidotes

My dad loves Pokemon too!

Decap Gym?? not sure

Swap the first “are” and “you”

From me instead of for me

Cap Pokemon

Decap School

 

Engineer

I started over and looked at dialogue from the start to Route 2. Let me know when this is fixed and I will work on the next set. I know there is a lot of double posts in here from other testers, but I wanted to make sure everything gets captured. I suggest moving the fixed reports to a section labeled "resolved reports" so this section is not so cluttered.

 

Decap School

 

Engineer

 

"vacancies"

sounds a bit weird, but wouldnt it be better for her to say: I am one(or the first) of the elite 4. "One of the Elite four" just sounds weird.

and 2nd part: remove the "the"... I won't show you mercy.

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ow. forgot to take screeny xD

When you defeat Lorelei she says: You may pass

Put the dot at end.. its missing...

 

You may pass .

 

 

 

 

 

edit: same with Bruno and Agata/Agatha, whatever her name is spelled xD

and the dot at end

Viridian Forest NPC errors

 

Decap What’s

Cap Pidgey

Cap Pidgey

Cap Pidgey

The kid gives you 15 Pokeballs……remove “about” since it is 15

Cap Pokemon

Decap Regular Old

Decap Regular Old

Period at end

 

Pewter City NPC errors

 

Pokemon

Pokemon

favorite

decap Welcome

Cap Pokecenter, decap Legendary, Cap Pokemon, $1,500 instead of 1,500 Pokedollars, if not, cap Pokedollars

cap Pokeballs

Our Pokemon is an outsider,

Pokemon

Add ! at end

Moon Stones

 

Route 3 NPC errors

 

Period

The NPC “the hole” is covering my front tire

Pokeballs

Pokemon

Why don’t you listen for a second?

Cap Pokemon

Cap Pokemon

Pokemon

Team Rocket attacks Cerulean City citizens.

Team Rocket

decap Welcome