SS Anne Basement Room 1

Typo?

"...barge on..." to "...barge in..."

to look tm 54, realized that there was no description, I came to think it was the npc, bought the item in my inventory continues without description.

*weight-lifting (NPC Kiroro)

"I am hoping they will ---be--- much stronger..."

On a side note.. my character looks very unimpressed... xD

SS Anne 1F Room 6

 

"...now as we speak" lose the "now".

 

At the indigo platue, the officer standing in front of the building for the johto E4 and champion says $Username instead of the players actual username.

I would have provided a picture, but I accidentally hit space bar :p

SS Anne 1F Room 3

(and probably other locations where nido/x are used.

The pokemon used by these trainers have incorrect genders, which they should not be able have. Check by various testers.

For example a male Nidoran F, and a male Nidorina.

SS Anne 1F Kitchen

"...does not bode well ---for--- the expectancy time..."

SS Anne 1F Kitchen

Captain's Aide

*preparatory

 

SS Anne 2F Room 2

Cubone

(not sure if it was on purpose or not, or if it even matters, but yeah)